Whiteout 12

posted 23rd Mar 2015, 7:29 PM

Whiteout 12
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23rd Mar 2015, 7:29 PM

Michael Campbell and William Leighton

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24th Mar 2015, 12:06 AM

ProfEtheric

Thinking of normals as "civilians"?

You, sir, are at war (at least in your head, but likely more).

Brilliant page, as usual. :)

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24th Mar 2015, 12:24 AM

Michael Campbell and William Leighton

Thank you Prof, we're a little worried by your comment however, the narration is from Embers, the BBW wielding fairy fire, not Wright, the priest. Do you have any suggestions on how we could make that clearer? We thought the way it was colored was telling. Maybe a faint portrait in the box?

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24th Mar 2015, 2:17 AM

ProfEtheric

Ooohhh... I kinda forgot the narration was coming from Embers. I thought it was coming from Agent Chase...

As far as clearing it up, the only thing I can think of is... maybe "flames" around it (I know it's kinda color-coded at this moment). Or maybe a symbol.

I feel really bad that I missed that. Hazards of actively following near 100 comics... The problem, I think, is that we haven't seen her in a few pages. With a weekly update, reader memory can be a problem...

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24th Mar 2015, 6:26 PM

Michael Campbell and William Leighton

Please don't feel bad ProfEtheric, it's a hazard of the online, one page a week set up of our webcomic medium. Adding an icon would help, as you suggested in your private message, it'd require each character to have one and turn them into superheroes, which is something we'd prefer to avoid. We're going to stick with what we have for now, it is a bit bothersome to think Embers's voice is lost somewhat but like we said, it's a hazard of the medium.

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24th Mar 2015, 11:18 AM

justin

man every page i read it just gets better and better :) cant wait to see more. keep up the good work will see ya at gamenight.

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24th Mar 2015, 6:20 PM

Michael Campbell and William Leighton

Thanks for stopping by Justin!

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26th Mar 2015, 12:57 AM

JustNoPoint

Why do I wonder if the people inside are human too?

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28th Mar 2015, 4:13 AM

Michael Campbell and William Leighton

You'll soon be finding out!

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